Swinging in the breeze,
All around are trees,
Swaying, whispering, praying;
I can feel it in the air,
Its no longer there.
That feeling, that keening.
Its gone,
I no longer care...
Feeling good,
Feeling bare…
What do i do? Why do i care?
Wednesday, March 08, 2006
Not a care...
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5 comments:
ahhhh...i like this......something light for once.....yayyy!
We women need this...esp after all that brouhaha about eve teasing...
cheers!
Megha
nice one....really liked it....
@megha
thank you, i know...
i was getting tired of sitting and writing/reading seriousness...
waiting for your next post...
@kaushik,
thank you,...
i wrote in college on my phone and saved it in drafts...
lol..
ciao..
the thing is, nina...
read the last line... "why do i care?"
now, does it make sense?
lol..
the rest of it was just a happy daydream...
but i started the poem elsewhere...
was juss finishing it in class... :)
crisp & cutly written...
btw, u have a beautiful blog...will come back and read more...cheers!
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